This was really not good.
It was not funny, and relied on crappy, immature humor (mostly yelling) to try to make us laugh. For me, it didn't cut it. I don't understand how this made it on Newgrounds, much less got the front page.
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This was really not good.
It was not funny, and relied on crappy, immature humor (mostly yelling) to try to make us laugh. For me, it didn't cut it. I don't understand how this made it on Newgrounds, much less got the front page.
Butts, butts everywhere but not a drop to butt.
You missed a perfect opportunity!
When the demon asks "What's in this bag?" you should have zoomed in on the other guy's face and had him say "Revenge."
I misssed the perfect opportunity because you weren't there for meeeeee!! > <. haha, thanks for the 10
It was pretty good.
Although, you could have implemented the "obvious ending" trick, in which the ending is anything but what the viewers expected.
I can agree that the ending was a bit obvious. I'll try to make better scripts in the future.
It was pretty good, not your *best* work.
But it was still good. And plus, it was a short, and it only took you a few days.
Thanks :)
Yeah this was more of a "I feel like making something" thing.
It was great.
The animation was awesome, truly in the spirit of Madness Day. It was smooth (for the most part), and the quality of the drawings was extraordinary. It certainly ended with a cliffhanger. I look forward to the sequel. The only error I found (and it doesn't really matter, I'm just flaunting my knowledge) was that neurons (brain cells) are the only cells in the body that don't undergo mitosis (aka cellular replication). In the sequel, though, please provide background information.
I know, I do biology and psychology, but this is an animation, and I chose to ignore that fact along with the fact that even if the neurons were to be replaced, it wouldn't replace the neural impulses that are memories, but ignore that part, this is just 4 fun
EHHHhhhhh....
Seizure.
Arrite.
Well, It was funny...
I found it funny, especially the way the bird dances. (he's very handsome, by the way)
However, there was only a small loop of the same music and bird dance.
You obviously have a good sense of humor and comedic timing, try to make something other than loops!
I just might.
Good...
It needs a "play all" button.
I may add one :) I kinda liked the idea that you guys got to pick and choose :)
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